The Sun's Bright Shadow

Team Name: The Sun’s Bright Shadow
Usually Called: Bright Shadow

Leader: Ray Kaizen (Fwink)

Emblem:


Team Rank: F

Current Members: Ray Kaizen (Fwink)

Team Motto: “Blind people can’t see.”
Team Song: Stare at the Sun - Thrice

Team Goal: Obtain the Flame Regalia

Team History:Will be made in RP

I may approve your team on one condition. You need to change your emblem its complicated and very un-simple. Its seems out of place compared to the other ones MAKE IT SIMPLE FOR US!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

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I agree with Kyoshu that the emblem, though obviously original, feels a little out of place. It just seems like it has too much going on in it, I don't really know how to describe it.

Also, your team history should be something about the team's past, like how it was formed or why. It shouldn't really be about its present or its future.

Thanks Ram Jet. yeah dude what he said

Well you just came off a little too strong I think, we've just gotta encourage our users and not smash their dreams with hammers... hammers pieced together of broken dreams.

Haha but at ur house you told me to say those things......... "you silly little wentch" Onigari if thats how you spell his name

Becasue I'm everywhere! EVEN IN UR HOUSE!

well your not in Somalia (waldo might be)

haha flipping wlado

dang i worked on that think for like 2 hours GAH!
ok fine ill change it, any suggestions though cuz i dont really know what would fit...

Probablt take the text out and maybe just stick with the stick figures, specifically the sunny shadow one. Just a suggestion.

or try something without stick figures make it small like the hydra or rose knight emblem

that's a good sticker to go on little miss bulletin board but an EMBLEM is an emblem

Well i took out the sords, but it looks kinda...empty...
any suggestions for what exactly i should try?

this was the first thing i did if you like it more

I definitely like the sun on the bottom, it seems very emblem-like. If you make that the emblem as a whole I could definitely see myself approving this.

ok heres the emblem, ill just make the history in the RP

Ram Jet i made an emblem for him but im not sure on how to put it in here so untill i do cause i wanna know what he thinks of it so untill its in here dont make any decsions

He has his emblem now so that doesn't really matter, but you shouldn't really make emblems and other content for other people's teams and whatnot. It's just not really polite to try and invade on other people's own creations.

well i don't particularly like this one so lemme see
you make it a Jpeg file, make sure its pretty small, and then click "Host an image" at the top. then you type in an email and password
then you browse and select the pic
then you copy the stuff under "image" and paste it

Well, if you're okay with it Fwink then there's not really a problem then, let's see what you got Kyoshu

Even though i dont have an emblem, would you mind if i started my Rp so Fwink and Ray can meet?

If I approve this then you're stuck with the emblem you have now unless Kyoshu posts his design later, if that's okay with you then I'll approve this.

i'll wait for Kyoshu. im just typing out what happenes on word.

which is better?
and im still waiting on Kyoshu

You know what screw it im ganna give you this team go with the lighter emblem ok but your stuck with that emblem FYI so if you like then your good if not well sorry Kid

APRROVED Hows that for a slice of fried gold.

wait i wanted to see your emblem...